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You are off to a good start. Some of the shots contain strong shadow lines that distract the eye. In others the background overpowers the piece being presented. Love your work you know that. Be careful of the lines created by the piece itself, don't let these lines lead off the page if you can help it. Just my observations. Just needs some pulling together and a little unity. Stronger may mean simpler? Brad


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